Always a pleasure. No bugs, and as much as the first person perspective is creepy, I'm thoroughly enjoying the adventure. Keep dishing out those pages, particularly that 'performer' bid!
Good work so far. No bugs just a few things I hope helps you in Twine.
I notice there's a lot of empty space in a number of your passages. I see your using "\" theres also "nobr" and "/nobr". This will help you remove empty code and space in the begining for example "nobr" code code code "/nobr" write here
or use it for end for all "if" statements for example "nobr""if" code write stuff here "/if" "if" code write stuff here "/if" "/nobr"
Thanks for the tip. I mentioned asking for help on the two boards I posted the game at. I am going to try <> next release and see if that clears things up.
Always a pleasure. No bugs, and as much as the first person perspective is creepy, I'm thoroughly enjoying the adventure. Keep dishing out those pages, particularly that 'performer' bid!
ReplyDeleteAllow me to quote Han Solo from A New Hope...
ReplyDelete"YAHOOOOO! You're all clear, kid. Now let's blow this thing and go home."
-Fires proton torpedo's-
That is essentially my reaction, except replace proton torpedo's with something else! :P
Good work so far. No bugs just a few things I hope helps you in Twine.
ReplyDeleteI notice there's a lot of empty space in a number of your passages. I see your using "\" theres also "nobr" and "/nobr". This will help you remove empty code and space in the begining for example
"nobr"
code
code
code
"/nobr" write here
or use it for end for all "if" statements for example
"nobr""if"
code write stuff here
"/if"
"if"
code write stuff here
"/if"
"/nobr"
NOTE: replace " with <<
Thanks for the tip. I mentioned asking for help on the two boards I posted the game at. I am going to try <> next release and see if that clears things up.
DeleteEmma here. I haven't noticed too many bugs or issues, just a few misspellings. I'm very eager to see your "bad" endings.
ReplyDeleteI hope you post an update soon. :)))
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