Chapter 11 Preview

I know I haven't been the best at keeping the blog updated, but I've been a little busy lately.  Luckily, I have some things coming down the pipe which should make for some interesting updates.  For now, here is a preview of Chapter 11.  Enjoy!

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Jeanette prowled up and down the line of six knights who earned her favor at the day’s tourney.  Each man was naked, except for the white strip of silk cloth from her dress wrapped around their heads as a blindfold.  Each strip had been embroidered with a pink heart on the inside panel, though they now all faced outward towards her.  Jeanette was naked as well, save for a gold belly chain, her royal pearls, and her crown.  A vibrant current flowed through the air as the knights anticipated their reward from the Queen.

She continued to inspect her champions as she walked back up the line.  All we were well built and in peak physical condition.  A smile curled on her lips as her eyes drift along their chiseled torsos, and then back along their hanging cocks.  There was a time when she found a naughty thrill in bedding old, decrepit, or obese men; but these days she preferred younger men in their prime, men with a stamina and endurance to match her own.

Her fingers combed through her hair, brushing it forward over her shoulder as she stopped in front of Sir Emry.  He was second only to the mystery knight who had vanished after the bout.  His loss, she thought.  Her nose wrinkled in annoyance as she spotted a gray hair hanging over her shoulder and plucked it from her mane, before letting it drop to the floor.  There are more of those every day.

She reached down and cupped his balls and hefted them in her palm.  A smile crossed her lips as she felt the weight of them, pleased with their fullness.  She felt his thick cock stir against her arm, and decided to move on.  There would be time for that later.

Next was Baron Alistaire Connought, a minor lord from the Duchy of Fullorm.  His shaft was smaller but more responsive.  It began to twitch and stir just from her standing in front of him.  Hopefully he would be able to last, and not shoot his load too early, she thought.

After the Baron came Sir Andrew Farring and Sir Theodore Cross, two lesser knights from the Duchy of Haverset.  She hadn’t heard of any of their deeds during the war, so they might be better tourney knights than actual warriors.  Still, their bodies were well muscled, so that must count for something.

Jeanette couldn’t stifle her giggle as she came to the next knight, Count Denis Exeter.  His penis was noticeably smaller than the others.  Though to be fair, it wasn’t nearly as small as the merchant she toyed with back in the Soiled Dove.  What was his name?  The one Cindy used to abuse.  Her stomach tightened as an image of Cindy hanging from a bar in her cell flashed in her mind.  She quickly pushed it away and returned to Exeter’s cock.  It somehow seemed to shrink even more at the sound of her laughter and she could see the Count squirming uneasily.

His cock looked even worse compared to the last winner’s.  The burly orc was an unexpected contestant, but had surprised everyone with his skill with the lance.  Although orcs are generally skilled riders, they didn’t take well to the new sport of jousting.  Krogth was an exception to that.  He was one of the first orcs born and raised in the Duchy of Braden under human law.  He combined the strength and speed of orcs with the discipline and professionalism of humans.  In a few years time and with more experience he would probably be the greatest knight in the Kingdom.

Naturally, Krogth’s cock was the biggest of the lot.  Jeanette lovingly traced the ridges wrapping around the shaft from the base to the slanted tip.  She teased the head between her thumb and forefinger, and then wrapped the meat up in her palm and gave it a quick squeeze, before finally pulling back from that as well.

“It’s time for your reward, my brave knights.  I’m going to get you all nice and hard, and then you can all give me a personal demonstration of how skilled you are with a lance.” 

7/14/16 Update

So as you can see, I wasn't able to finish the latest Queen's Castle on time.  The 4th of July Holiday and a busy week kept me from getting much done.  I've done better this week, except I'm back to working on Elfin Descent.  By the end of the day I should be about halfway done with Chapter 13.  As soon as I finish with that I'll be back on Queen's Castle.

I've also been working on the Bestial Breed RPG.  I've got two games going right now and they are both quite fun.  The rules definitely need to be worked some more, but we're still managing a nice little roleplay.  I'll post the narrative of them when they reach a natural stopping point.

Sorry for the lack of updates, but I've been pretty busy.  I'll try to better stay on top of things though!

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Here are some captions made from pictures drawn by CedarGrove.  He was referred to me in the comments and I found his pictures to be quite inspiring!  You can see more of his awesome work   here. 

Chapter 12 and On

I finished Chapter 12 last week and am moving on to the next Queen's Castle story.  Unfortunately, with the holiday and some other things going on this week I don't think I will be able to finish it by Friday.  If I've made good progress I will try to finish it early next week.  If not, it will have to wait until I finish Chapter 13.

I submitted Chapter 10 today, so it should be posted to Literotica on Friday.  I will post a preview for Chapter 11 in a week or so.  I added in a Jeanette interlude to the chapter to flesh it out, since a lot of the meat went to Chapter 12.  It's still a decent chapter though, and for all the people asking for a Jeanette sex scene, your requests have been answered.

It occurs to me that there's only 5 chapters left in Elfin Descent.  I can't decide if it's gone faster or slower than I anticipated.  It's certainly going slower than Zentara did, but Elfin Descent is much longer.  I'm actually getting close enough now that I am thinking about forgetting about side projects and pushing ahead full steam on finishing Elfin Descent.  Once I finish the story, I'm going to start posting chapters much closer together, possibly one chapter a week.  That will give you plenty of time to read, rate, and comment on each chapter before seeing the next.

So which do you prefer?  That I write Elfin Descent exclusively, or that I continue to push out new Queen's Castle stories every couple of weeks? Let me know in the comments.

After Elfin Descent is done, I'll probably take a short break of maybe a week or two and then get started on Agmar's story.  Agmar is getting a short story of about 3-4 chapters where he invades the Catabrian Tribes.  This will set up for the final book, Triumph, which will chronicle the final war between Zentara, Heste, and the Elfish Isles versus Thesta and Sandora.  

Triumph is going to be a more ambitious story, involving 5 main characters in multiple locations with interweaving plot lines.  Ideally I'll be applying everything I've learned writing into it, and it will be professional level fiction in addition to grade A smut ;)

If you have any comments on what part of my writing I can improve upon, please leave those in the comments as well or email me at orcdominion@gmail.com.