Orc Dominion: Coronation

One of my many many side projects is writing a second edition of Orc Dominion: Zentara, which will be renamed Orc Dominion: Coronation.  I'm going to make several changes and additions to the story.  For instance, I'm going to change the ending, so that the scene with Sir Drake is extended and gives a more fitting conclusion.  I'm also going to change the orgy at the end to make it a little less extreme.  There will still be a wedding gangbang, but it will probably focus on Jeanette and Susannah rather than the entire court.  Any specific ideas or suggestions are welcome.

I'm also going to adjust some of the other scenes, such as the Jeanette performance on the stage, to make it less risky for her, or rather, do write them in such a way that people aren't wondering 'how the hell can no one tell it's really her'.

One of the things I am going to add is an ongoing subplot with the Eight Duchies of Zentara.  Each Duchy is going to have their own candidate for Jeanette's hand in marriage, and she is going to have to weave in and out between them, stringing them along with promises but not choosing one or the other and risk alienating the rest.  And of course, in the end she's going to settle on an orc ;)

With that plot line, the question I have for you is how overtly slutty do you think I should make Jeanette?  Should she be sexually manipulating the Duchies this early in her character development, or should she be more subtle?  I don't think she should be showing the nobles how big a whore she is this early, but on the other hand, it is the City of Sin and some things are expected.  Let me know what you think!

I also want to add some other scenes.  There were some scenes planned for The Soiled Dove that I never got to implement (though some of those became Tales of the Soiled Dove chapters).  I could add some of those into the narrative, like with the Duke's Party.  What if I had her using her role as a prostitute to gather information on the Duchies?

Finally, as I've mentioned before, my ultimate plan is to sell these online.  This would start with the second edition.  I'm still undecided whether to leave Zentara up on Literotica or not, or maybe have part of it on there as a preview.  How willing would you be to pay for a second edition of the story?  As well as a second edition of Rebellion?  What do you think would be a fair price?

All that being said, Elfin Descent and Triumph will still be posted on Literotica for free.  However, future second editions, after I've finished the first version, will eventually be offered for sale.

Thanks for any feedback, suggestions, advice, or responses you have!

Blogspot vs Literotica

I just wanted to take a quick moment to talk about the differences in posting my stories on Blogspot vs Literotica.

The main benefit of Literotica is exposure.  Thousands of people will read my stories there, versus the hundreds that will read it here.  Another benefit is that their comment, feedback, and rating system is better than what you'll find on the blog.

So why put (some) stories on Blogspot as opposed to Literotica?  Well, the main reason is content. I can basically put anything I want on my blog, whereas Literotica has limits.  For instance, in the outline for Orc Dominion: Zentara there is a scene during the campaign where Jeanette gets fucked by hounds in the orc camp.  I had to cut that from the story because Literotica wouldn't allow it.

Blogspot is also a lot friendlier with formats.  Yes, you can put formatting in Literotica stories, but doing so requires that you submit it to their moderators for implementation.  That means it goes from taking two days to getting posted to taking a week, which is a pain.  The other benefit with using Blogspot is that posting is instantaneous, and it's also a lot easier to go in and fix things if I see an error.

So what does it all mean?  Well, Elfin Descent and Triumph will both be posted on Literotica.  The as yet unnamed Agmar short story is going to be posted here, because Agmar is just too hot for Literotica to handle ;)  Seriously, there is going to be some messed up shit in his story!  It's going to be dark!

Also, I'm going to post most of the side stories here as well, starting with Queen's Castle: The Queen's Party which will hopefully be done on Friday.  I want to time the release with Chapter 8 being posted so I can add a comment there to direct viewers here to see it.  This story is going to be the incest extravaganza you've all been asking for!

That's another thing:  I really don't like Literotica's policy of not allowing authors to promote their blogs in their stories.  I do appreciate why you wouldn't want people posting links directly from their stories, but I think it's a little unreasonable that I can't even put in an author's note saying "hey, check out my blog.  Look on my bio page for the link".

So that's that.  As a bonus, here are some more pictures from Inda No Himekishi Janne that I didn't get a chance to post before:

 This is one of those places where you lose some nuance.  The ending is called "Mother of Augur".  I can't real tell if they mean "Mother of Ogres" or "Mother of Prophecy."  Basically, Janne gives birth to a bunch of ogres who overrun the world.  Also, that's Janne fucking her oldest son while wearing a magical collar that guarantees impregnation.

 This is the "Love Love Gido" end, and in it Janne (I keep typing in Jeanette!) falls in love with her ogre master.  She gets tattoos in orcish script proclaiming her submission to him, and a number of hearts aroundher pubic mound, one for each child of his she has.  She also ruthlessly suppresses revolts against his rule.

 I think this is the scene I mentioned earlier where Janne is one stage sucking 10 ogre dicks, each one cumming multiple times.  I also drew from this because in the game the MC starts by announcing that she is a Janne look alike, but as she does more appearances the MC reveals more and more until finally it is happening in her true name.

Here is the natural conclusion to her wedding: an ogre gangbang!  I really love this game and associated stories!

If anyone has any pictures or series they want to share, please send them to me.  I can always use more content to put on the blog!

Elfin Descent Ch 10 and Queen's Castle

I finished Chapter 10 of Elfin Descent yesterday!  Unfortunately I'm not completely satisfied with the end.  I was really excited to have Jeanette giving out 'favors' at the joust, but in the end that became a backdrop for what Lyriena and Trogar were doing.  Which is how it should be, I suppose, since they are the main characters.  Nonetheless, I just couldn't get the Jeanette stuff onto the page like I wanted.  I might flesh (heh) that out into a Jeanette MILF story in the future.

Also, as a quick update, I decided to split Chapter 11 into two, so now Elfin Descent is back to being 17 chapters.  I think it is going to work out much better stylistically this way, since it extends a certain plot point.

Speaking of which, now that Chapter 10 is done I can spend next week working on the first Queen's Castle story, The Queen's Party.  Jeanette is celebrating her birthday, and in order to encourage her court to give her birthday spankings, she blindfolds herself so that no one can be punished later.  Little does she know that Agmar has snuck into the party....

I've got a few other ideas for Queen's Castle stories which will show up in the future.

1.  The Queen's Men.  Jeanette inducts new members into her personal guard.
2.  The Queen's Promise.  On the eve of battle, Jeanette makes Grotok's stallion a promise if he brings her son back safe.
3.  The Queen's Prisoner.  What happened to Garrett Ousten, the once King of Heste?  Jeanette has need of her prisoner.  This one will likely be a tie-in to Orc Dominion: Triumph which is the last book in the Orc Dominion series.

If you've got any other ideas for stories you want to see, (and I'm sorry if you've said them on other comment pages and I forgot them.  Say them here and remind me!) please let me know and I will consider them!  Also, if you have a preference as to which of those stories you want to see first, let me know!

Inda No Himekishi Janne

Time to pull back the curtain here and share one of the biggest inspirations I had for writing the Orc Dominion series: the hentai series Inda No Himekishi Janne, or "something something Princess-Knight Janne".  Yes, that's where I got the idea for a 'princess-knight' from.

Himekishi Janne is an adult visual novel produced by Catwalk Nero.  Alas, it is not available in English.  However, with the Interactive Text Hooker and the Atlas translation program it does become playable, though you lose a lot of nuance.

Catwalk Nero also made two animated videos, which have been translated into English.  Those are how I was first introduced to the series.  At the time, they pushed all of my buttons and became a huge fantasy point for me.

In the game, Princess-Knight Janne is the crown princess of a kingdom who is blessed with angelic power that makes her a great warrior.  She makes enemies of an ogre named Gido, who uses a dark elf to kidnap Janne's sister.  A curse is put on the sister so that whatever happens to Gido happens to her, preventing Janne from harming him.

Janne being infected by the creature.

As a result, she is captured and infected with a creature that slowly transforms her womb into being capable of being impregnated by any kind of beast/monster, as well as makes her lewd and causes her to fall in love with anyone who rapes her.  At least, I think that's what it means, since as I said you lose some of the nuance.  This is demonstrated first by a card placed over her slit and the red tattoo just above her pubic mound.

Gido uses the threat to Janne's sister to blackmail into doing all sorts of lewd and degrading things, such as working as a prostitute and performing on stage in sex shows.  Hmmm, that sounds familiar...

 Janne is tied up in a booth at an 'oral brothel'.  Later, she volunteers to serve all the clients to keep the other women from being degraded in such a place.

Janne being whored out to bums for the price of a bowl of rice.

Janne being gangbanged by a kobold, an orc, and an ogre on stage.

Janne getting fucked by a dog on stage.  The announcer makes special note of how she trained the dog to fuck her when there weren't any big dicked ogres to satisfy her.

Janne forced to masturbate publicly with an ogre dildo.

There's also a scene where Janne has to blow 10 orcs on a stage for a performance, which I shamelessly borrowed for a scene in Orc Dominion: Zentara.  The game is quite long, too long really.  Some of the scenes get repetitive, but all in all it was great.  There are a number of endings to the game.  One, Janne basically becomes an animal and lives in a kennel being bred by pigs and dogs.  In another, she falls in love with the ogre and becomes his enforcer when he takes over the kingdom.  There is also a harem ending where her, her sister, and her step mother all end up pregnant by ogres and all the women are turned into breeding stock.  It's really great stuff!  I wish someone would translate it!

Catwalk Nero also made a sequel, which is good, but not on the level of the original.

 Janne and her family impregnated.

 Janne being presented as Gido's bride.

Janne stripped to show off her pregnant belly!

The two animations follow a simplified plot.  Janne's stepmother is kidnapped and held hostage forcing her compliance.  They are both abused, and by the end the Queen and the Princess are being fucked and forced to sign a treaty ceding all their power.  Yeah, I borrowed that too, as I did the ending where a pregnant Janne and Queen are stripped at the wedding and fucked.  The videos are easy to find online if you search for Inda No Himekishi Janne English.  SubDesu-H did a good translation, as did another group.  If you're into that sort of thing, I highly recommend checking it out!

There are also some erotic comics out there, but they are not nearly as good.  A couple were translated into English, and if you can't find them email me and I'll send them to you.

So there you go, my biggest inspiration to start writing.  I hope you enjoy it as much as I did.  If enough people spread the word, maybe some translator will be inspired to work on it.  Who knows?

Elfin Descent Excerpt

I just wanted to share a brief excerpt from Chapter 10, which I am currently writing.  So beware of spoilers I guess, but there isn't anything too juicy in the passage.  If you guys would like to see more excerpts from future chapters, please say so in the comments.  If you don't want to see any, say that too.  Enjoy!

“It was a fine attempt, Lyriena, but you failed.  Now you need to pay the price.”  The Prince nodded to Soleil and Florette.

The two elf maids grabbed each of Lyriena’s arms and held them tightly.  The princess grunted and tried to pull her arms back, but before she could escape Trogar reached to her dress and curled her fingers into the neckline and ripped down the front.  Lyriena flushed in shame as her small tits became bare before the orc Prince.

“You are going to respect our customs and traditions.” 

Another strong tear brought the torn remnants of her dress to her ankles, leaving her clad only in her panties, stockings, and shoes.  Lyriena struggled again, weaker this time.  She was fast wilting beneath the blazing heat of her humiliation.

“You are going to respect me and my servants.”

His thick grey hand gripped Lyriena’s pubic mound and squeezed.  The orc curled his fingers around the gusset and tore even that off next.  Another quiver rocked through the elf princess’ body as her most intimate spot was exposed.  The soft curve of her mons was still mostly bare, with only the lightest sheen of fuzz covering it to show that she had stopped removing it.

“And you are going to enjoy every moment of it.”

A deep, low moan escaped Lyriena’s lips as Trogar returned his hand to her now exposed pussy.  His thick fingers rolled over her nether lips, pulling them apart to reveal her pink folds.  The pads of his fingers glided over her slick inner walls.  She could feel how wet she was as the orc rubbed between her legs, and it filled her with shame.

“If you don’t, these negotiations will end and it will be war.  Is that clear?”

Alice Week 3

So it seems that Alice has been scared off.  Perhaps she got called into Human Resources again and got fired...or perhaps someone in her apartment caught on to the wicked, naughty games she was playing.  Either way, she didn't give me a complete report this week and hasn't been replying to my emails.  As a result, I'm going to assume she broke all the rules and release six new facts.  If she doesn't respond to me by next week, I'll post everything I know about her.

Here were  the rules of the week:

1.  She will wear panties at least two times this week.
2.  She won't take off her blouse and bra while masturbating at work with her vibrator turned on.
3.  She will not make a fool of herself trying to look at her coworkers underwear.
4.  She won't serve her food to her guests after fucking herself with it.
5.  She won't let her coworkers see down her blouse.
6.  She will not go out on her day off and flash anyone.

Bonus:  She won't flash Rene when she gets her pedicure.


2.  She won't take off her blouse and bra while masturbating at work with her vibrator turned on.

After over one hundred edges over a long weekend, Alice couldn't help herself when she finally went to work.  She went to the bathroom like she always does, and stripped off her shirt and bra.  She sat there, topless, in a public bathroom and pulled out her vibrator and buzzed her clit for two minutes. She was imagining being used in all her holes, and being gang-banged until she was left dirty and covered in cum.

4.  She won't serve her food to her guests after fucking herself with it.

Alice also broke this rule on Thursday, when she had her weekly get together.  I told her that she was allowed to cum if she fucked herself with some food and then served it to her guests.  Alice fucked herself with corn cobs, cumming again and again all over them before she served it to her friends.

6.  She will not go out on her day off and flash anyone.

Alice had Monday and Tuesday off last week,  On Tuesday, the weather was nice so she sunbathed outside in the nude.  24 apartments had an unrestricted view of her naked body.  Who knows how many people were watching?  Touching themselves?  Who knows how many might have recognized her?

Bonus:  She won't flash Rene when she gets her pedicure.

She had the pedicure appointment with Rene on Monday.  She went out and wore a short skirt with no panties.  She made sure to keep her legs spread while it was being done, but apparently Rene didn't look up her skirt.  I guess some people are professional, and don't use their work as a way of living out their perverted fantasies.

Also, here is the updated fact list:

1.  She lives in or around Glasgow, Scotland.
2.  She works in a call center as a Process Specialist.
3.  She has a coworker named Amy.
4.  She goes to a manicurist named Rene.
5.  She attended the University of Glasgow.
6.  She works in the legal industry.
7.  She has blonde hair.
8.  Her roommate's name is Jana
9.  One of her guests on Thursday was Jana's cousin, Nikolaj
10. Alice was born in December
11. She has a sister and three brothers
12. She is the oldest child.
13. She's been working at her current job for 2.5 years.
14. The last person she was in a relationship with was named Josefine.

Rules for next week will be added if she ever gets back to me.  Every day that goes by will count as a failed rule, and if she doesn't get back to me at all I will publish everything I know and end the game.

Current Projects

So I tried to put a poll up, but I couldn't get it to work properly. I will keep trying, but if anyone has any suggestions please contact me. I've decided to list out my current projects and hopefully get some feedback on what you would like to see most. Here is goes:

 1. Orc Dominion: Elfin Descent. I'm currently writing Chapter 10, and am about 3000 words in. Unfortunately I didn't get as much done this week as I'd hoped, but I'm still on track to finish next week. Right now, it is going to be 16 chapters. Chapter 11 is either going to be really long, or I will break it into two and have a total of 17 chapters.

 2. Lyssara: Captive of the Minotaurs. The third story in the Adventures of Lyssara. In order to break the spell hiding the wizard's location, Lyssara needs to travel into the labyrinth of the minotaurs in order to get a spell component. However, the minotaurs aren't in the mood to negotiate! Expect to see sex with minotuars, centaurs, and a lot of cum play in this story!

 3. The Adventures of Captain Lochley. This is the sci-fi interactive twine story I'm working on. You play as Captain Susan Lochley, a human captain on a mission to capture a dangerous weapons manufacturer. However, when you try to apprehend her, she injects you with nanobots! The nanobots control the hormones in your body, making you become addicted to sex, and causing you to have all sorts of naughty adventures. Right no the plan is to have 6 endings. Each choice builds up your attribute scores, which ultimately determine which ending you get.

 4. Orc Dominion: Misc. I've got a couple misc orc dominion stories to write. The first is the Angrian March story, starring a heroine from the Eastern Kingdoms who gets captured by orcs while traversing the March. The second is a Jeanette MILF story, showing some of the decadent activities she plays in her castle. Expect the usual bondage, gangbangs, and maybe a touch of incest!

 Speaking of incest, I can't help but notice that's a common request for my stories. If you want to see that, now is the time to say something! Or, really, if there is any kink you want to see, say so now. I'm pretty open to most things, though be aware that literotica won't allow everything on their site. Though I think the smaller stories will probably be published on this blog in the future. I have to do something to keep people coming back, right?

 Anyway, as for more extreme kinks, possibilities are bestiality, rape, incest, watersports maybe, more extreme femdom etc. Feel free to mention anything I didn't list. Let me know what you want to see!

More Writing

Unfortunately I didn't get nearly as much work done on Lyssara: Captive of the Minotaurs as I wanted.  Still, I am a few thousand words further along than I was, so that's something.

For now, it's back to writing Elfin Descent.  Today I'm writing about the joust that's closing out the festival celebrating the Zentaran victory.  As you might know, it is traditional for a lady to give her champion a 'favor' before riding out to the list.  This could be a scarf, sleeve or some other strip of cloth.  Well, as I'm sure you can imagine, Jeanette has her own special twist on what sort of 'favor' to give out, though you'll have to wait and see what form that will take place when Chapter 10 is posted!

Captions 1

Here are some captions I made.  Thanks to Tegli for sending me the pictures!  If anyone has some pictures they want to see captioned, feel free to send email them to me at orcdominion@gmail.com.  I didn't draw any of the original art.  Where available, I left the artist signature in.  If you're the artist and want attribution, please contact me and I will be happy to add it!

 I considered making this one about Lyriena, but the hair is wrong.  Still, it seems like something that would happen to her, right?

 I don't normally like slugs, but this one spoke to me.

 You have to pay the troll toll to get in!

This one will probably be a story at some point.

Alice Week 2

This is Alice's summary for week 2.  Here's how she did with her rules for the week:

1.  She will wear panties to work at least two times.
2.  She won't masturbate at work with her vibrator turned on.
3.  She will not make a fool of herself trying to look at her coworkers underwear.
4.  She will wash her pillowcase after humping herself to the edge of climax on it.
5.  She won't flash Rene when she gets her pedicure.
6.  She won't eat her food after using it to masturbate.

She managed to pass number one by virtue of the fact that she only went to work three days last week.  Lucky her!  It's the same for this coming week, so she might not get her life totally ruined yet.  Number five is kind of a wash, since her pedicure got cancelled and rescheduled to Monday.  I will let that rule carry over as a bonus.  Now, as to the failures...

2.  She won't masturbate at work with her vibrator turned on.

Alice failed this rule fairly late in the week, on Thursday.  She had just told me that she was going to have a five day weekend, and I had just told her that she had to edge once an hour every day for the whole weekend!  Well, the prospect of that torture was too much for her and she immediately went to the bathroom and buzzed her vibe against her clit.  The nasty little slut even imagined being a toilet!  Apparently, she's got a little watersports fetish that comes out sometimes.

4.  She will wash her pillowcase after humping herself to the edge of climax on it.
6.  She won't eat her food after using it to masturbate.

Alice failed these two back to back on Monday.  Of course, she had spent most of Sunday and Monday edging every hour.  She fucked herself with a cucumber while imagining that her pussy was the only seasoning she was allowed to use from now on!  I should probably mention that as a punishment, I had her buy the cucumber while dressed only in a trench coat with her fingers sticky from pussy juices and her hair mussed like it was fresh from the bed.

After she edged doing that, she mounted her pillow and humped the crap out of it, imagining she was tied up on a sawhorse.  She fell asleep exhausted afterward, and didn't wash it.  Hell, it's now a week later and she still hasn't washed it!

As for her game, she didn't do too badly this week since she only worked three days.  She even managed to succeed a few times, though eventually her coworkers are going to start wondering why she's always trying to peek down their blouses.

This brings us to the rules for week 3!  it should be even easier this week since she isn't working as much.  However, this week I'm adding in an attitude adjustment for her, to start putting her in the right mindset.

Every day at work, Alice will do something submissive for a coworker or subordinate.  Whether it's serving them coffee, picking up lunch, doing an errand, taking a message.  She has to do something to start showing everyone at her job that she's a submissive tool to be used.

Here are the rules:

1.  She will wear panties at least two times this week.
2.  She won't take off her blouse and bra while masturbating at work with her vibrator turned on.
3.  She will not make a fool of herself trying to look at her coworkers underwear.
4.  She won't serve her food to her guests after fucking herself with it.
5.  She won't let her coworkers see down her blouse.
6.  She will not go out on her day off and flash anyone.

Bonus:  She won't flash Rene when she gets her pedicure.

Also, here is the updated fact list:

1.  She lives in or around Glasgow, Scotland.
2.  She works in a call center as a Process Specialist.
3.  She has a coworker named Amy.
4.  She goes to a manicurist named Rene.
5.  She attended the University of Glasgow.
6.  She works in the legal industry.
7.  She has blonde hair.

Bestial Breed Risus Game

I am interested in trying to write an interactive story game based on Rastakax's Bestial Breed world using the RISUS system.  How it would work is you would make a character set in the world of Bestial Breed and then email it to me.  I would then write up a scenario and send it to you.  You then reply with your actions, I roll them out, and write up what happens.

You can either be a monster or a hero.  If I get enough of each, you'll be fighting against each other :)
Otherwise, I will just play it by ear depending on who is interested.

You can make a character according to the rules found here.

The character should be based off the world book, which can be found here.

 Email me at orcdominion@gmail.com to play.

I look forward to having a great time playing this game with everyone!

Here is an example of my character.  Yours doesn't actually need the whole writeup I did, just the classes and a brief description to give me an idea of what scenario would be appropriate for your character.

Villena
Mage 4
Scholar 3
Adventurer 3

Villena is a mage and scholar dedicated to studying the ruins of Arkadia, and the treasures within. She is a beautiful young woman with pale skin and coal black hair. She is usually based out of the city of Exeden, though occasionally she ends up in other cities as trade requires.

In order to fund her research, she often traffics in monster cum, as well as other monster parts. However, rather than submitting to the lustful desires of monsters, she typically uses her magic to defeat and extract the components she needs. Occasionally she’ll find a lost treasure, which also helps fund her activities.

It is a dangerous game she plays. Villena knows that the odds suggest that sooner or later her luck will run out, she’ll be impregnated, and end up a monster breeder. In order to forestall this fate, she’s started communing with demons, hoping to learn the secrets of birth control. So far they have only given her temporary respite, requiring lengthy deals that offer her protection for only a limited amount of time.

Villena is typically armed with a staff and dagger, and favors long flowing robes that protect her from the heat. Her favored schools of magic are perdition and transmutation. She is also skilled in finding and disabling traps and picking locks, which helps her when she combs through the ruins of Arkadia.

Writing Update

I figured maybe I should actually write something about my series, so I decided to give everyone an update.  I finished Chapter 9 of Elfin Descent yesterday, and I am now sending it off to my beta readers for feedback.  I'm a little uncertain about the way I have it now.  If I don't change anything, it will probably be one of the more controversial chapters I've done.

Chapter 7 has been edited and will be submitted to Literotica on Wednesday.  It usually takes about two days for it to go live, so expect to see it around midnight Friday morning.  I'm excited for people to read this chapter, because I think it's one of the better chapters I've written.  Lyriena turns a corner in this chapter and really sets off down the path of corruption!

I'm going to spend the rest of the week working on the next Lyssara story, though I probably won't be able to finish it this week.  For anyone interested, it's going to be called "Lyssara: Captured by the Minotaurs".  Lyssara discovers that the magical ingredient she needs to break the spell obfuscating the wizard's tower is the eye of a labyrinth worm which can only be found in the abandoned labyrinths of the Minotaur civilization.  However, when she delves into the depths of the earth, she discovers that the labyrinth isn't as abandoned as she thought.

 Next week it is back to Elfin Descent, with Chapter 10.  My current plan is to write each chapter in two weeks, and then spend one week working on one of my other projects.  I currently plan for Elfin Descent to have 16 chapters.  After that, there will be a four chapter series starring Agmar which will set up the final war between the Thestan/Sandoran alliance and Zentara.

Final Elfin Descent Pictures

Here are the last batch of pictures of Lyriena, unless anyone feels inspired to make some and sends them to me!

 I love the red dress.  Delightfully skimpy!

And some final nudes of her.  Thanks again to Horpheu Desmunio!