So as you can see, I wasn't able to finish the latest Queen's Castle on time. The 4th of July Holiday and a busy week kept me from getting much done. I've done better this week, except I'm back to working on Elfin Descent. By the end of the day I should be about halfway done with Chapter 13. As soon as I finish with that I'll be back on Queen's Castle.
I've also been working on the Bestial Breed RPG. I've got two games going right now and they are both quite fun. The rules definitely need to be worked some more, but we're still managing a nice little roleplay. I'll post the narrative of them when they reach a natural stopping point.
Sorry for the lack of updates, but I've been pretty busy. I'll try to better stay on top of things though!
Thanks for the update. Take the time you need to keep your high quality standards. I am especialy looking forward to reading the new Queen´s castle story.
ReplyDeleteWhen will chapter 11 post?
ReplyDeleteIn two weeks.
DeleteOne story line i would like you to consider is how the Queen is famous for her sluttyness and therefore has to use teasing and voyeurism to string people in court along... both supporting and opposing her... but she cant fuck everyone as much as she'd like cuz that dilutes her charm/attraction and gives people power over her... so has to resort to more incest with agmar.. who you give a reason to use the Queen like a rag...
ReplyDeleteThat's an interesting idea. I like the idea of writing a nice political scene where Jeanette is teasing courtiers/nobles whose support she needs without letting it devolve into an orgy. I'll think about it!
Deletethanks.. youve emboldened me now.. ive been thinking along the same lines as you... Jeanette is getting older.. and sex with humans... now you have obviously started writing more core fantasy with the Codex series.. so i would like you to consider this:
Delete1) lets have a magical secret that gives Jeanette everlasting beauty stopping her ageing and priming her physical attributes...
2) lets have a magical way for her to control the Orc race's fertility..
how this works out is Jeanette uses the magic to dwindle the Orc's number... thus she is now the only female (Orc/human/elf) except maybe Lyrenia who can have orc babies... so she controls the orcs completely as she controls their future..
the main reason i want you to write like this is because in Zentara i thought u would head here.. with Zeanette giving up her body and pride for the throne.. now the new angle should be despite being sexy outwardly, she has lost interest in sex cuz nothing is new.. but she has to use sex as political weapon. so she tightens up her pussy and ass magically so even an elf can fuck her and gets raped and humiliated by just about everyone... but now because of the power of the orcs giving her an undefeatable army and lyrenia's trade skills making her throne crazy rich, she can never be usurped. so the storyline should be about how different groups and races (orcs, humans and elves) conspire to dethrone her and get fleeting successes but ultimately lose to her royal family and her power as a goddess queen.
the basic story arc i'm getting at is that Zeanette wins in the end (with respect to the end of Zentara and Rebellion) storylines where she is basically a puppet queen jerked around by Orcs who hold sexual power over her. now i want it reversed. after years (and you can include a conspiracy theory about how she got Turogg killed) she has the throne to herself. she loves Zentara and her throne more than anything. so she rules better than any queen/king in fantasy fiction history (even fucking Aragorn) but the price is she is known as the whore queen and disrespected by all and sundry. so she she has to fight various rebellious factions and also to win the hearts and respect of the common people... what do ya think?
It's a fun idea and might do well as an alternate end story, but it's not the direction I am going to go, at least not in the main story. Maybe it could be part of the Queen's Castle series happening behind the scenes.
DeleteI am going to introduce magic, but it will be done by the male protagonist of the last book, Triumph. The focus of the last book is going to be the struggle between the Zentaran alliance and Thesta and Sandora.
What you described might also work after that story, as a prelude to the next series if I ever get around to writing it. I do like your ideas though, so thank you for sharing them. Even if I don't use them in their entirety, some things might make it through!
cheers...ill be thrilled
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