Orc Dominion: Elfin Descent is officially finished! Thank goodness it is all done. I am not going to lie, I was starting to phone it in a little at the end. Hopefully I will be reinvigorated to work on some other projects now that I am passed that!
I submitted the chapter today, and it would usually be posted on Thursday. But due to the holiday, I'm not sure when it will go up so keep your eyes peeled.
I hope to write the Afterward tomorrow, and get that submitted as well. I do have a lot of thoughts to collect though so might actually be next week by the time it gets posted.
Thank you everyone who has stuck with the story so long, and to everyone who provided feedback, both positive and negative, as well as encouragement and assistance. Hopefully this week I will be a little more active on the blog, with maybe some captions, a short story, and an official announcement of the Twine game I am writing being made. Hey, you have to aim high!
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Tuesday, November 22, 2016
Saturday, November 12, 2016
Elfin Descent Finale Preview
I am still slogging my way through the finale, but that fact that I am slogging means that it will probably be a little shorter than it should be. We'll see. I hope to get it finished this week, I just have 3 pages or so left to go.
I've been really busy lately, which hasn't helped. It may get a little better this week, but there is another big project that is sort of on call, and if it gets approved then this week will probably be out too. We'll just have to see!
Once Elfin Descent is done though, I hope to get back on top of this blog. I've got captions to do, ad maybe some more short stories. I'll also be introducing the game I've been working on! I hope you enjoy it, even if it will be a sci-fi game and not fantasy. Anyway, here is a page from the finale!
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I've been really busy lately, which hasn't helped. It may get a little better this week, but there is another big project that is sort of on call, and if it gets approved then this week will probably be out too. We'll just have to see!
Once Elfin Descent is done though, I hope to get back on top of this blog. I've got captions to do, ad maybe some more short stories. I'll also be introducing the game I've been working on! I hope you enjoy it, even if it will be a sci-fi game and not fantasy. Anyway, here is a page from the finale!
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The reception was all a blur; she was too distracted with
dread of the upcoming bedding ceremony.
The tradition was an old one and in retrospect a little odd. Even the Zentarans didn’t watch newlywed
couples together on their wedding night.
But with modesty and chastity being so important to elfs, the public declaration
of the bride’s virtue was essential.
Even still, the tradition usually called for the families to be waiting
outside of a curtained bed for the groom to make his determination.
But this wasn’t your typical situation. Lyriena wasn’t a virgin, and everyone knew
it. In cases like hers, where the woman
was marrying the man who deflowered her, the bedding ceremony was usually
quietly forgotten. However, in some
circumstances the ceremony remained.
This was especially true for marriages that sealed alliances or other
agreements. Both sides would want there
to be witnesses that the marriage was completed and consummated so one side
could not back out later.
So Lyriena had to put up with the shame of half the court
witnessing Trogar penetrating her on her wedding night. Normally it was the bride’s family that insisted,
since it was usually the husband that would reject an impure bride. She suspected it was Trogar insisting
though. Not only would it ensure that
she couldn’t wiggle out of the marriage later, but it would be a delicious
humiliation for her.
The worst part is that some part of her wanted it. She came hard the other day when imagining
it. But now that it was to be a reality,
her stomach was in knots. Lyriena
quickly downed a goblet of wine to steady her nerves.
“Let’s get the happy couple upstairs!”
“I heard it’s going to be an open curtain bedding!”
“I’ve been waiting to see the princess bedded for years!”
Lyriena couldn’t see which of her courtiers were so eager to
see her naked body. Were they people she
had known, maybe for years? Perhaps elfs
weren’t so different from men after all.
Perhaps elfin women had to protect their modesty so dearly since elfin
men were just as lecherous as humans and orcs.
If anything could dissuade her from the line of thinking it
was the look on Datoran’s face. Despite
having humiliated her earlier, he seemed far from detached from the
procedure. His face was drawn tight and
tense. She couldn’t tell if he was angry
or ashamed. He was right, she
realized. Her whole wedding was one
giant passive reminder that he had been cuckolded by an orc; an orc he would
henceforth have to kneel to.
“Let us get this over with.”
Her father muttered.
A sea of hands swept over her, touching her thighs and back
and arms as she was lifted up and carried to her chambers. Bolder hands stroked her bottom and breasts,
and boldest of all was Soleil, who began undressing her before they even left
the dining hall.
Lyriena flushed hotly as she felt her small breasts spill
free from the tight confines of the corseted dress. Rough fingers pinched her pierced nipples,
and the tiny rings were twisted, making her gasp out loud.
Saturday, September 24, 2016
Chapter 14 should be up this Friday. Sorry for not posting the preview sooner, but I've been crazy busy. But progress is being made, and I should finish up Ch 15 this weekend, and then move on to 16 and 17. Almost done!
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Lyriena’s heart pounded in her chest as she waited behind
the stage. She couldn’t hold back the
violent tremors shaking her to her core, despite how unroyal it made her
look. But perhaps that was for the best;
she definitely didn’t want anyone thinking she was royal tonight. She had been firm in her resolve to rob
Trogar of the prize of her maidenhead, but now that the moment was here she
couldn’t help but have doubts.
The fact that she was naked from the neck down didn’t do
anything to help the shivering in her bones.
Her pierced nipples and shaved pussy would be clearly visible to
everyone in the room who was in position to see the stage.
“Ladies and Gentlemen, we here at Faerie Lights have a very
special treat for you tonight.”
The only thing about her that would be obscured was her
head. In order to protect her anonymity,
Brahm had provided her with a leather hood that would cover her distinctive
golden hair as well as her face. No one
would be able to recognize her, now or later if they saw her in the street.
“All the way from the Elfish Isles is the young lady Amerei,
eager to sacrifice her virtue on the altar of our delights.” The announcer proclaimed to a roaring
approval from the crowd.
Lyriena’s heart thudded faster at that; Brahm’s words were
cutting a little too close to the truth.
Why did he use her fake name? He
didn’t have to do that, but some people might remember that the former queen
was named Amerei. She exhaled nosily
through the hole cut out for her mouth, and then inhaled deeply through the
slots for her nostrils. Everything else
was covered; even her eyes. They were a
window to the soul, Brahm said, and could be used to recognize her. She would never know who claimed her
virginity tonight, but perhaps that was for the best.
The hood was hot and fit very snuggly with all her hair
tucked into it adding to her discomfort and a bit of a struggle to put on. She was nervous at not being able to see but
reasoned that maybe for the best. She
thought her heart would beat out of her chest when Brahm had zippered it
closed.
“But that is not all.
You see, our delightful little ingénue is actually engaged to be
married! But she is a little uncertain as to how exactly her
virginity should be taken; she just knows she doesn’t want it to be by her
fiancé. So who shall it be? Who gets to take her virginity? An elf?
A human? Or maybe even…an
orc?” The latter choice got the loudest
scream of support.
Another shiver went through her at the idea of an orc taking
her maidenhead. She hadn’t been sure
about this little game when Brahm proposed it, but it was so naughty that it
didn’t take long to convince her.
“So our slutty little elf is going to sample one of each,
before making her decision right here on stage before you all. So, would you like to meet our special
guest?”
The crowd roared again, which was Lyriena’s cue. Soft hands took her by the arm and led her
out on stage. Is it Marietta, she wondered.
It would somehow be fitting to have her so close on hand for her final
depredation. She had a large hand in
starting it, after all.
The cheers of the crowd were near deafening, but fortunately
the mask did much to dampen the noise.
Still, some of the jeers managed to cut through the noise and her mask.
“Damn that bitch is ready for it!”
“What’s with them tiny tits?”
“Hah, I knew this was bullshit; no noblewoman would have her
nips pierced like that. She’s just
another whore!”
“Nah, I bet all those rich elf bitches pierce themselves up
like that.”
Her elfin companion tugged down slightly on her arm, urging
her to kneel. Lyriena sunk to the floor,
legs spread slightly. She felt the soft
hands leave her arms and slide across her breasts and pull and twist her
nipples rings eliciting a moan from her as a foot prodded her to spread her
knees wider which she obediently did giving the crowd a better view of her
glistening slit. From the noise she
sensed she was nearly at the edge of the stage, completely in sight of
everyone. She could feel the hungry gaze
of the crowd devouring her naked flesh.
The princess couldn’t believe she was doing this, but also couldn’t
believe how hot it was making her. She comforted
herself with the thought that her face was entirely hidden and they would never
know it was the princess herself performing for them tonight.
Saturday, August 27, 2016
Ch 13 Preview and Update
So I am about 75% done with Chapter 14, and I am really pleased with it. It is looking to be about 12,000 words, with the bulk of it being one massive sex scene that caps the chapter. Although I am really excited about it, I will say that if you haven't liked the way Elfin Descent has been going so far, you probably won't like this chapter either. On the other hand, if you do like how Elfin Descent is going, you're going to like this chapter a lot!
That being said, here is a quick preview from Chapter 13:
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That being said, here is a quick preview from Chapter 13:
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“Lyriena, welcome.”
The Prince grinned widely as he greeted the princess. His tongue flicked over his tusks as he
leered at the royal elf. “We’ve been
waiting for you. Soleil, isn’t there
something you wish to say to your Princess?”
Soleil’s jaw looked like it might shatter. Her eyes shot daggers at Lyriena, but she
nonetheless approached and dropped into a curtsey. But instead of rising again, she lowered
herself to the floor and began kissing the princess’ feet. “Forgive me Your Highness. You’re a Princess and I’m just a lowly whore;
I should never have treated you so disrespectfully.” Soleil ran her lips over the toe of Lyriena’s
silk shoe, and then began dragging her tongue up and down the sides. “Please forgive this lowly slut. I was jealous of your beauty, your wealth,
your stature, and the attention showed upon you by the Prince. I’m willing to accept any punishment you deem
proper.”
Of course she didn’t seem truly sorry, but Lyriena preferred
it that way. She didn’t want a contrite
Soleil, she wanted a proud, arrogant Soleil to be humiliated. She wanted to make the whore sorry and put
her permanently in her place. Seeing the
servant kiss her foot filled her with a power she had never felt; not even when
she was secure in her identity and position back in Deznessuian.
It felt good, having this power. It made her feel strong, and she relished it
after feeling powerless for so long.
“You will be punished, whore; for touching your betters, for deigning to
assert authority over me.” She lifted
her foot and began to press her shoe against Soleil’s face. She rubbed the sole over the servant’s tongue
and forced her to worship every inch of it.
She could already feel her pussy getting moist, and a shiver of
excitement shot through her. She was
definitely going to enjoy this!
“I’ve had some ideas on that front, Lyriena. Florette?”
Soleil’s sister approached the princess with a long wooden
box. She presented it to Lyriena, who
then opened it. Inside was a long, thick
dildo fashioned in the shape of a horse’s cock.
Lyriena gasped at the sight of it.
It was huge! It also appeared to
be connected to a harness of leather straps.
“It’s molded off of Eastern Wind’s cock” Trogar said with a
grin. “I thought you might fuck Soleil
with it, to assert your dominance over her.”
This was based on
Eastern Wind’s penis? It is so long,
so thick so powerful looking, she thought with wonder as she traced her
fingers alongside it. A smile crossed
her lips as she imagined her big stallion mounting the insolent servant. Maybe she’d be able to arrange that for real
before this was all over! For now
though, the idea of ravishing her with her mount’s shaft made her smile. “That is an excellent idea, Trogar!” She gave Soleil a wicked grin. “Strip off those clothes, slut. A whore does not need them!”
A triumphant grin crossed Trogar’s face at Lyriena’s enthusiasm. “That’s true, Lyriena; whores don’t need
clothes.”
Soleil grimaced, but nonetheless unlaced her dress and
peeled off her clothes, letting them fall to the floor and pool at her feet. She trembled in apprehension at the thought
of Lyriena’s revenge. The harlot looked
down at the massive sex toy and shuddered.
It was bigger than anything she had taken before, and she had taken many
large shafts. It was certainly bigger
than any orc she ever had!
The naked elf’s twin circled behind Lyriena and began to
unlace her dress. “Let me help you,
Princess. These things can be a little
difficult to figure out the first time.
But I’m sure you’ll get the hang of it!”
Lyriena shivered in excitement as her body was bared. Her
pierced nipples stiffened as they became exposed to the two elfs and the
Prince. The tiny gold rings glistened in
the light as her small bust heaved. Each
touch of Florette’s soft fingers on her hips as she applied the harness sent
electric jolts of pleasure through her body.
Finally, Florette finished and the princess looked down at the thick,
heavy sex toy jutting out lewdly from her body.
Is this what men felt like?
Soft footfalls sounded in the room as she stepped towards
Soleil. She placed her hands on the
elf’s shoulders and pushed her roughly to the floor. She then shook her hips and slapped the
horse-cock dildo across the servant’s face.
“Have you ever taken one of these before, Soleil? I know you have fucked elfs and humans for
money. And you’ve fucked orcs for
money. But what about horses? It seems like it would be the natural
progression for you. Well, if you have
not before, you are going to now.”
Wednesday, July 20, 2016
Chapter 11 Preview
I know I haven't been the best at keeping the blog updated, but I've been a little busy lately. Luckily, I have some things coming down the pipe which should make for some interesting updates. For now, here is a preview of Chapter 11. Enjoy!
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“It’s time for your reward, my brave
knights. I’m going to get you all nice
and hard, and then you can all give me a personal demonstration of how skilled
you are with a lance.”
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Jeanette prowled up and down the line of six knights who
earned her favor at the day’s tourney. Each
man was naked, except for the white strip of silk cloth from her dress wrapped
around their heads as a blindfold. Each
strip had been embroidered with a pink heart on the inside panel, though they
now all faced outward towards her.
Jeanette was naked as well, save for a gold belly chain, her royal
pearls, and her crown. A vibrant current
flowed through the air as the knights anticipated their reward from the Queen.
She continued to inspect her champions as she walked back up
the line. All we were well built and in
peak physical condition. A smile curled
on her lips as her eyes drift along their chiseled torsos, and then back along
their hanging cocks. There was a time when
she found a naughty thrill in bedding old, decrepit, or obese men; but these
days she preferred younger men in their prime, men with a stamina and endurance
to match her own.
Her fingers combed through her hair, brushing it forward
over her shoulder as she stopped in front of Sir Emry. He was second only to the mystery knight who
had vanished after the bout. His loss, she thought. Her nose wrinkled in annoyance as she spotted
a gray hair hanging over her shoulder and plucked it from her mane, before
letting it drop to the floor. There are more of those every day.
She reached down and cupped his balls and hefted them in her
palm. A smile crossed her lips as she
felt the weight of them, pleased with their fullness. She felt his thick cock stir against her arm,
and decided to move on. There would be
time for that later.
Next was Baron Alistaire Connought, a minor lord from the
Duchy of Fullorm. His shaft was smaller
but more responsive. It began to twitch
and stir just from her standing in front of him. Hopefully
he would be able to last, and not shoot his load too early, she thought.
After the Baron came Sir Andrew Farring and Sir Theodore
Cross, two lesser knights from the Duchy of Haverset. She hadn’t heard of any of their deeds during
the war, so they might be better tourney knights than actual warriors. Still, their bodies were well muscled, so
that must count for something.
Jeanette couldn’t stifle her giggle as she came to the next
knight, Count Denis Exeter. His penis
was noticeably smaller than the others.
Though to be fair, it wasn’t nearly as small as the merchant she toyed
with back in the Soiled Dove. What was his name? The one Cindy used to abuse. Her stomach tightened as an image of Cindy
hanging from a bar in her cell flashed in her mind. She quickly pushed it away and returned to
Exeter’s cock. It somehow seemed to
shrink even more at the sound of her laughter and she could see the Count
squirming uneasily.
His cock looked even worse compared to the last
winner’s. The burly orc was an
unexpected contestant, but had surprised everyone with his skill with the
lance. Although orcs are generally
skilled riders, they didn’t take well to the new sport of jousting. Krogth was an exception to that. He was one of the first orcs born and raised
in the Duchy of Braden under human law.
He combined the strength and speed of orcs with the discipline and
professionalism of humans. In a few
years time and with more experience he would probably be the greatest knight in
the Kingdom.
Naturally, Krogth’s cock was the biggest of the lot. Jeanette lovingly traced the ridges wrapping
around the shaft from the base to the slanted tip. She teased the head between her thumb and
forefinger, and then wrapped the meat up in her palm and gave it a quick
squeeze, before finally pulling back from that as well.
Wednesday, June 22, 2016
Writing Update
Chapters 10 and 11 of Elfin Descent are done and are being edited as we speak. I'm currently working on Chapter 12 and will hopefully finish it early next week. If I do, then I may be able to publish the next chapter early. I'll let you know how it's going.
I'd like to thank everyone who responded with comments on the blog and through literotica. I really do appreciate hearing from people, and it does influence what and how I write. As I mentioned in one of the replies, the next Queen's Castle story will be set during the Second Hesten War, and will definitely feature Jeanette/Horse, Jeanette/Agmar, and Jeanette/Hounds. I may also work some Jeanette/Grotok in there if it makes sense.
I am going to start work on that story after I am done with Chapter 12, and it should take about a week to complete. Like the other Queen's Castle stories, it is going to be posted exclusively on this blog.
Please note that I posted a new poll on the sidebar asking what types of kinks you most want to see. If you select 'other', please let me know what you want to see in the comments.
Finally, welcome to all the new visitors to my site! The daily views have skyrocketed since my last plug on literotica. I hope everyone enjoys what they see here and keeps coming back for more!
I'd like to thank everyone who responded with comments on the blog and through literotica. I really do appreciate hearing from people, and it does influence what and how I write. As I mentioned in one of the replies, the next Queen's Castle story will be set during the Second Hesten War, and will definitely feature Jeanette/Horse, Jeanette/Agmar, and Jeanette/Hounds. I may also work some Jeanette/Grotok in there if it makes sense.
I am going to start work on that story after I am done with Chapter 12, and it should take about a week to complete. Like the other Queen's Castle stories, it is going to be posted exclusively on this blog.
Please note that I posted a new poll on the sidebar asking what types of kinks you most want to see. If you select 'other', please let me know what you want to see in the comments.
Finally, welcome to all the new visitors to my site! The daily views have skyrocketed since my last plug on literotica. I hope everyone enjoys what they see here and keeps coming back for more!
Sunday, June 12, 2016
Elfin Descent Ch 11 Writing Woes
I had hoped to finish Chapter 11 on Friday, but I am running a little behind. I should hopefully finish it this weekend or tomorrow. I am still on track to post Chapter 9 next week.
Chapter 11 is only going to advance the story a little bit. I decided to split Ch 11 into two chapters to extend a plot line that develops. Unfortunately, I struggled with fleshing out each half enough, and had to add some padding. So Ch 11 is going to be about half plot and half a sexy Jeanette MILF interlude. I don't think people will mind that so much, since it is what they've been asking for. I hope you enjoy it!
Chapter 12 should be a little stronger, since it received the bulk of the important plot points from Chapter 11.
On a side note, please check out the new poll on the blog, and vote for which kind of content you want to see. When I say short stories, I mean really short, like one scene in length.
I haven't been able to update the blog as much as I wanted to this last week. Hopefully this week will be better! As always, I welcome comments and suggestions in the comments or by email at orcdominion@gmail.com.
Chapter 11 is only going to advance the story a little bit. I decided to split Ch 11 into two chapters to extend a plot line that develops. Unfortunately, I struggled with fleshing out each half enough, and had to add some padding. So Ch 11 is going to be about half plot and half a sexy Jeanette MILF interlude. I don't think people will mind that so much, since it is what they've been asking for. I hope you enjoy it!
Chapter 12 should be a little stronger, since it received the bulk of the important plot points from Chapter 11.
On a side note, please check out the new poll on the blog, and vote for which kind of content you want to see. When I say short stories, I mean really short, like one scene in length.
I haven't been able to update the blog as much as I wanted to this last week. Hopefully this week will be better! As always, I welcome comments and suggestions in the comments or by email at orcdominion@gmail.com.
Wednesday, June 8, 2016
Elfin Descent: Chapter 09 Excerpt
A short preview of what you can expect in Chapter 9. Let me know in the comments if you like getting previews or if you would rather not have spoilers. Look for Chapter 9 on June 17th.
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Despite the crowd filling the room, a table had been set
aside for her towards the back, but with an unobstructed view of the
stage. Clearly Brahm had taken careful
consideration to find the best spot to put her.
Once she was seated, it didn’t take long for the owner to appear with a
bottle of wine and a glass for her. She
blushed as he approached. How was she
going to be able to look him in the eye after last time? He knew that she knelt in the dirty little
stall and sucked on strange men’s penises.
“Welcome, Your Highness.
Oh excuse me, I didn’t mean to say that so loudly. Maybe I should call you something else while
you’re here? I don’t want to attract
attention.” The man spoke genially, and
with a bit of familiarity. After all, he
had coached her on giving blowjobs and had put his hands in her dress.
“I suppose you can call me Lyriena while I am in the public
areas of the club.”
“Are you sure you want to use your real name? A little more anonymity might be advised.”
That was a good point.
“You can call me Amerei then.” A
moment later she regretted it. What possessed
her to use her mother’s name? But it was
the only one she could think of on the spot.
“Amerei? How
lovely. Maybe I can call you Ami for
short. You came on a good night, Ami,
tonight we’re having a very special event.”
“I noticed that the crowd seemed unusually large tonight,
Brahm. What is going to happen?” What sort of wicked, depraved thing could
generate this much excitement among the jaded audience of a sex club? She thought, after all her experiences in
Ruar this week that she couldn’t be surprised, but she was wrong.
“It’s an insemination party.” Brahm smiled as he watched the princess
freeze. “Always a big draw. One of our girls is ovulating, and is willing
to risk getting impregnated by the crowd.”
Saturday, May 21, 2016
Elfin Descent Ch 10 and Queen's Castle
I finished Chapter 10 of Elfin Descent yesterday! Unfortunately I'm not completely satisfied with the end. I was really excited to have Jeanette giving out 'favors' at the joust, but in the end that became a backdrop for what Lyriena and Trogar were doing. Which is how it should be, I suppose, since they are the main characters. Nonetheless, I just couldn't get the Jeanette stuff onto the page like I wanted. I might flesh (heh) that out into a Jeanette MILF story in the future.
Also, as a quick update, I decided to split Chapter 11 into two, so now Elfin Descent is back to being 17 chapters. I think it is going to work out much better stylistically this way, since it extends a certain plot point.
Speaking of which, now that Chapter 10 is done I can spend next week working on the first Queen's Castle story, The Queen's Party. Jeanette is celebrating her birthday, and in order to encourage her court to give her birthday spankings, she blindfolds herself so that no one can be punished later. Little does she know that Agmar has snuck into the party....
I've got a few other ideas for Queen's Castle stories which will show up in the future.
1. The Queen's Men. Jeanette inducts new members into her personal guard.
2. The Queen's Promise. On the eve of battle, Jeanette makes Grotok's stallion a promise if he brings her son back safe.
3. The Queen's Prisoner. What happened to Garrett Ousten, the once King of Heste? Jeanette has need of her prisoner. This one will likely be a tie-in to Orc Dominion: Triumph which is the last book in the Orc Dominion series.
If you've got any other ideas for stories you want to see, (and I'm sorry if you've said them on other comment pages and I forgot them. Say them here and remind me!) please let me know and I will consider them! Also, if you have a preference as to which of those stories you want to see first, let me know!
Also, as a quick update, I decided to split Chapter 11 into two, so now Elfin Descent is back to being 17 chapters. I think it is going to work out much better stylistically this way, since it extends a certain plot point.
Speaking of which, now that Chapter 10 is done I can spend next week working on the first Queen's Castle story, The Queen's Party. Jeanette is celebrating her birthday, and in order to encourage her court to give her birthday spankings, she blindfolds herself so that no one can be punished later. Little does she know that Agmar has snuck into the party....
I've got a few other ideas for Queen's Castle stories which will show up in the future.
1. The Queen's Men. Jeanette inducts new members into her personal guard.
2. The Queen's Promise. On the eve of battle, Jeanette makes Grotok's stallion a promise if he brings her son back safe.
3. The Queen's Prisoner. What happened to Garrett Ousten, the once King of Heste? Jeanette has need of her prisoner. This one will likely be a tie-in to Orc Dominion: Triumph which is the last book in the Orc Dominion series.
If you've got any other ideas for stories you want to see, (and I'm sorry if you've said them on other comment pages and I forgot them. Say them here and remind me!) please let me know and I will consider them! Also, if you have a preference as to which of those stories you want to see first, let me know!
Monday, May 16, 2016
Elfin Descent Excerpt
I just wanted to share a brief excerpt from Chapter 10, which I am currently writing. So beware of spoilers I guess, but there isn't anything too juicy in the passage. If you guys would like to see more excerpts from future chapters, please say so in the comments. If you don't want to see any, say that too. Enjoy!
“It was a fine attempt, Lyriena, but you failed. Now you need to pay the price.” The Prince nodded to Soleil and Florette.
The two elf maids grabbed each of Lyriena’s arms and held
them tightly. The princess grunted and
tried to pull her arms back, but before she could escape Trogar reached to her
dress and curled her fingers into the neckline and ripped down the front. Lyriena flushed in shame as her small tits
became bare before the orc Prince.
“You are going to respect our customs and traditions.”
Another strong tear brought the torn remnants of her dress
to her ankles, leaving her clad only in her panties, stockings, and shoes. Lyriena struggled again, weaker this
time. She was fast wilting beneath the
blazing heat of her humiliation.
“You are going to respect me and my servants.”
His thick grey hand gripped Lyriena’s pubic mound and
squeezed. The orc curled his fingers
around the gusset and tore even that off next.
Another quiver rocked through the elf princess’ body as her most intimate
spot was exposed. The soft curve of her
mons was still mostly bare, with only the lightest sheen of fuzz covering it to
show that she had stopped removing it.
“And you are going to enjoy every moment of it.”
A deep, low moan escaped Lyriena’s lips as Trogar returned
his hand to her now exposed pussy. His
thick fingers rolled over her nether lips, pulling them apart to reveal her
pink folds. The pads of his fingers
glided over her slick inner walls. She
could feel how wet she was as the orc rubbed between her legs, and it filled
her with shame.
“If you don’t, these negotiations will end and it will be
war. Is that clear?”
Monday, May 9, 2016
More Writing
Unfortunately I didn't get nearly as much work done on Lyssara: Captive of the Minotaurs as I wanted. Still, I am a few thousand words further along than I was, so that's something.
For now, it's back to writing Elfin Descent. Today I'm writing about the joust that's closing out the festival celebrating the Zentaran victory. As you might know, it is traditional for a lady to give her champion a 'favor' before riding out to the list. This could be a scarf, sleeve or some other strip of cloth. Well, as I'm sure you can imagine, Jeanette has her own special twist on what sort of 'favor' to give out, though you'll have to wait and see what form that will take place when Chapter 10 is posted!
For now, it's back to writing Elfin Descent. Today I'm writing about the joust that's closing out the festival celebrating the Zentaran victory. As you might know, it is traditional for a lady to give her champion a 'favor' before riding out to the list. This could be a scarf, sleeve or some other strip of cloth. Well, as I'm sure you can imagine, Jeanette has her own special twist on what sort of 'favor' to give out, though you'll have to wait and see what form that will take place when Chapter 10 is posted!
Tuesday, May 3, 2016
Writing Update
I figured maybe I should actually write something about my series, so I decided to give everyone an update. I finished Chapter 9 of Elfin Descent yesterday, and I am now sending it off to my beta readers for feedback. I'm a little uncertain about the way I have it now. If I don't change anything, it will probably be one of the more controversial chapters I've done.
Chapter 7 has been edited and will be submitted to Literotica on Wednesday. It usually takes about two days for it to go live, so expect to see it around midnight Friday morning. I'm excited for people to read this chapter, because I think it's one of the better chapters I've written. Lyriena turns a corner in this chapter and really sets off down the path of corruption!
I'm going to spend the rest of the week working on the next Lyssara story, though I probably won't be able to finish it this week. For anyone interested, it's going to be called "Lyssara: Captured by the Minotaurs". Lyssara discovers that the magical ingredient she needs to break the spell obfuscating the wizard's tower is the eye of a labyrinth worm which can only be found in the abandoned labyrinths of the Minotaur civilization. However, when she delves into the depths of the earth, she discovers that the labyrinth isn't as abandoned as she thought.
Next week it is back to Elfin Descent, with Chapter 10. My current plan is to write each chapter in two weeks, and then spend one week working on one of my other projects. I currently plan for Elfin Descent to have 16 chapters. After that, there will be a four chapter series starring Agmar which will set up the final war between the Thestan/Sandoran alliance and Zentara.
Chapter 7 has been edited and will be submitted to Literotica on Wednesday. It usually takes about two days for it to go live, so expect to see it around midnight Friday morning. I'm excited for people to read this chapter, because I think it's one of the better chapters I've written. Lyriena turns a corner in this chapter and really sets off down the path of corruption!
I'm going to spend the rest of the week working on the next Lyssara story, though I probably won't be able to finish it this week. For anyone interested, it's going to be called "Lyssara: Captured by the Minotaurs". Lyssara discovers that the magical ingredient she needs to break the spell obfuscating the wizard's tower is the eye of a labyrinth worm which can only be found in the abandoned labyrinths of the Minotaur civilization. However, when she delves into the depths of the earth, she discovers that the labyrinth isn't as abandoned as she thought.
Next week it is back to Elfin Descent, with Chapter 10. My current plan is to write each chapter in two weeks, and then spend one week working on one of my other projects. I currently plan for Elfin Descent to have 16 chapters. After that, there will be a four chapter series starring Agmar which will set up the final war between the Thestan/Sandoran alliance and Zentara.
Monday, May 2, 2016
Final Elfin Descent Pictures
Here are the last batch of pictures of Lyriena, unless anyone feels inspired to make some and sends them to me!
I love the red dress. Delightfully skimpy!
And some final nudes of her. Thanks again to Horpheu Desmunio!
Thursday, April 28, 2016
Even More Elfin Descent Pictures
So I was looking through the folder and I had even more pictures than I remembered. Hell, I had some pictures I didn't remember! So there will likely be another post of pictures after this one. Thanks again to Horpheu Desmunio for making them!
These last two look more like goblins then my orcs, but I'd still like to see Lyriena fucked by them!
Still a bit bustier than I pictured, but hey, large tits never bothered anyone!
This inspired the dress that Lyriena was wearing in Ch 05
I like this dress a lot, but I think it would be hard to describe in prose.
Monday, April 25, 2016
More Elfin Descent Pictures
Here are some more pictures from Elfin Descent. This time featuring Soleil, Florette, and Lyriena. Enjoy!
Florette in a white dress, and topless.
Soleil
Both sisters naked.
And the twins with a scantily clad Lyriena. The Princess in her rightful place!
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