New Poll and updates

I finished Ch 16, and am well on my way through Ch 17.  Almost done!  I'm really enjoying writing the epilogue, and I think the rest of it will be fun as well.

That being said, I posted a new poll on the right, asking what you would make you consider buying a second edition of Orc Dominion: Zentara (to be known as Orc Dominion: Coronation).

I'm already going to change the ending, making it a little softer to better fit the rest of the story and the stories that came after.  I would like to see what my readers want in turns of focusing on additional sex scenes, adding some sub plots, refining characterization, or adding more world building material.  Please let me know!  And if you have any specific ideas for scenes you want to see, feel free to add them in the comments.  Thanks!

10/15/2016 Writing Updates

I'm wrapping up Ch. 16, which means I should be starting Ch. 17 next week.  The last chapter!  I'm sure many people will be happy to see Elfin Descent go and to be honest, I'm one of them.  I just did not enjoy writing a fantasy story about political intrigue as much as I do writing about warfare and combat.

Going forward, this is going to change.  The next story in the Orc Dominion series is going to be about Agmar.  Set a little further down the timeline, Agmar, his many bastard sons, and an army of green skinned orcs invade the Catabrian Tribes to fight and enslave the barbarian natives. 

Agmar is a bigger dick than Trogar, but I am going full villain with him.  That means he is going to be at least tactically competent and own what a jerk he is.  However, this is going to be a short story, as Agmar is really just too dark to keep going for very long.  Expect around four chapters.  The story will be posted on this blog since it covers themes that are restricted from being posted on Literotica.

After that, it will be time to move onto Orc Dominion: Triumph.  The Agmar story will set up the final conflict that takes place in this book.  Triumph is going to be a little more ambitious, involving 5 main characters with interweaving plot lines.  We're going to have one plotline set in Heste, Two in Thesta, One in the Angrian March, One in Zentara.  I'll also be introducing real magic for the first time!

Before all that, though, I am going to take probably a month off to work on my Twine project.  I am writing an interactive novel about a starship captain who gets injected with nanobots which change her body and control her behavior, resulting in numerous slutty situations.  Your choices will determine which of 6 endings she gets.  I'm already about 20% of the way done, and want to get to 40% before I post the first version.  I'm not sure I'll be able to finish it in one month, but I at least hope to get to the 4 main endings.  Then I can branch out and fill out the rest of it.

That's pretty much that.  No preview this week, as Ch 15 doesn't really lend itself well to providing a preview. 

Game: Jeanette's Blanket

Tegli, one of my longtime readers, has made a Twine game set in the alternate ending of Orc Dominion: Zentara Ch 12b.  It is a prelude to a continuation of that storyline that he is writing.  It's short, but it's a fun, easy read.  It's more of an interactive novel than a game, but there are a few endings.  Enjoy!


Jeanette's Blanket

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Chapter 14 should be up this Friday.  Sorry for not posting the preview sooner, but I've been crazy busy.  But progress is being made, and I should finish up Ch 15 this weekend, and then move on to 16 and 17.  Almost done!

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Lyriena’s heart pounded in her chest as she waited behind the stage.  She couldn’t hold back the violent tremors shaking her to her core, despite how unroyal it made her look.  But perhaps that was for the best; she definitely didn’t want anyone thinking she was royal tonight.  She had been firm in her resolve to rob Trogar of the prize of her maidenhead, but now that the moment was here she couldn’t help but have doubts.

The fact that she was naked from the neck down didn’t do anything to help the shivering in her bones.  Her pierced nipples and shaved pussy would be clearly visible to everyone in the room who was in position to see the stage. 

“Ladies and Gentlemen, we here at Faerie Lights have a very special treat for you tonight.”

The only thing about her that would be obscured was her head.  In order to protect her anonymity, Brahm had provided her with a leather hood that would cover her distinctive golden hair as well as her face.  No one would be able to recognize her, now or later if they saw her in the street.

“All the way from the Elfish Isles is the young lady Amerei, eager to sacrifice her virtue on the altar of our delights.”  The announcer proclaimed to a roaring approval from the crowd.

Lyriena’s heart thudded faster at that; Brahm’s words were cutting a little too close to the truth.  Why did he use her fake name?  He didn’t have to do that, but some people might remember that the former queen was named Amerei.  She exhaled nosily through the hole cut out for her mouth, and then inhaled deeply through the slots for her nostrils.  Everything else was covered; even her eyes.  They were a window to the soul, Brahm said, and could be used to recognize her.  She would never know who claimed her virginity tonight, but perhaps that was for the best.

The hood was hot and fit very snuggly with all her hair tucked into it adding to her discomfort and a bit of a struggle to put on.  She was nervous at not being able to see but reasoned that maybe for the best.  She thought her heart would beat out of her chest when Brahm had zippered it closed.

“But that is not all.  You see, our delightful little ingénue is actually engaged to be married!  But she is a  little uncertain as to how exactly her virginity should be taken; she just knows she doesn’t want it to be by her fiancé.  So who shall it be?  Who gets to take her virginity?  An elf?  A human?  Or maybe even…an orc?”  The latter choice got the loudest scream of support.

Another shiver went through her at the idea of an orc taking her maidenhead.  She hadn’t been sure about this little game when Brahm proposed it, but it was so naughty that it didn’t take long to convince her.

“So our slutty little elf is going to sample one of each, before making her decision right here on stage before you all.  So, would you like to meet our special guest?” 

The crowd roared again, which was Lyriena’s cue.  Soft hands took her by the arm and led her out on stage.  Is it Marietta, she wondered.  It would somehow be fitting to have her so close on hand for her final depredation.  She had a large hand in starting it, after all.

The cheers of the crowd were near deafening, but fortunately the mask did much to dampen the noise.  Still, some of the jeers managed to cut through the noise and her mask.

“Damn that bitch is ready for it!”

“What’s with them tiny tits?”

“Hah, I knew this was bullshit; no noblewoman would have her nips pierced like that.  She’s just another whore!”

“Nah, I bet all those rich elf bitches pierce themselves up like that.”

Her elfin companion tugged down slightly on her arm, urging her to kneel.  Lyriena sunk to the floor, legs spread slightly.  She felt the soft hands leave her arms and slide across her breasts and pull and twist her nipples rings eliciting a moan from her as a foot prodded her to spread her knees wider which she obediently did giving the crowd a better view of her glistening slit.  From the noise she sensed she was nearly at the edge of the stage, completely in sight of everyone.  She could feel the hungry gaze of the crowd devouring her naked flesh.  The princess couldn’t believe she was doing this, but also couldn’t believe how hot it was making her.  She comforted herself with the thought that her face was entirely hidden and they would never know it was the princess herself performing for them tonight.

Reviews: Laurana the Golden General

 This isn't really a story review per se, but rather, a collection of stories about Laurana, the Golden General from Dragonlance.  It's been a while since I've read the books, so I may have some of this wrong.  But Laurana is an elven princess/queen who starts out a little spoiled but eventually becomes a great general.  Her love interest is Tanis, a half-elf, who society tells her she can't have.

The Dragonlance series isn't really about her, at least in the beginning.  But nonetheless, she's a great character to have lewd and erotic things happen to.

The first author I am going to highlight is Kaiv.  Unfortunately, he seems to have long since retired from writing.  However, his works are still really good, and he doesn't really leave any cliff hangers.  What I like about his stories are that he captures the personality of Laurana really well...well, he captures it with the slight modification that she's a slut waiting to be awakened :)

The Siege of Kalaman is probably my favorite story, so I would start there if I were you.

Kaiv's Stories

The next author I'm going to mention is Eucher, from Naked Blades.  I just stumbled upon her stories the other day and they are pretty good.  The sex is very descriptive, and the situations are hot.  The only drawback is that her stories tend to start with Laurana already being 'broken', so you don't see a lot of Laurana's personality.  Nonethless, they are definitely entertaining reads.  You might need to register with Naked Blades to be able to see them.

Eucher's Stories

The last author I'm going to share is pjurado, another older author of internet smut stories.  However his stories are all complete, so nothing to worry about there.   To be honest, I don't entirely remember much about his stories other than that I enjoyed them.  So without further ado:

PJ's Stories

Enjoy!

Story Review: Chronicles of Rapina

Chronicles of Rapina

Before saying anything else, I'm going to warn you that the series is unfinished and it appears to only be updated once a year.  If that's going to bother you, then I can only suggest keeping an eye on the story and waiting for it to be finished (if it ever is).

That being said, there is already several books worth of content to the story.  Even better, the way the story is structured gives a lot of closure to major arcs, so there is some satisfaction.  I said earlier that there are several books worth of content, and that is how the story is designed.  Even though it is presented as one big story, it's really more like three complete stories and part of a fourth one.

If you don't want to get stuck with a partly completed story, I would suggest reading up to chapter 70 and then waiting for more chapters to be completed.

Anyway, Chronicles of Rapina is a story about a young woman who is abducted by a lecherous priest who wants to make her repent of her sins.  As might be expected, he plans to use his penis to do much of the purification.  Luckily for Rapina, a necklace her aunt gave her contains a lust spirit who teaches her sex magic that allows her to escape, and embark on a series of adventures.

The story covers a wide array of kinks, with gangbangs, monsters, beasts, lesbians and so on.  The sex is mostly consensual, with Rapina being a slutty seductress as opposed to a victim.  The three book structure I mentioned earlier keeps things moving and interesting, so the story doesn't ever really fall into a rut.  Also, Rapina adopts a number of different identities over the course of the series, which helps break things up.

All in all, it has a good mix of plot, fighting, magic, and sex.  The only drawback, besides the production schedule, is that Rapina is a bit of a Mary Sue.  But in a way that just makes seeing her ride a big troll dick all the more enjoyable!

So if you have a moment, check out the Chronicles of Rapina.